I believe that the poor should be provided actual goods like food. First, the money can be used by the wrong way like drugs and
nicotic. There are many poor people that have nicotine addiction. If they receive money from the cities, they may use the money
by buying many drugs. So it is not helpful to them. Second, they really want to eat, wear and live in the warm place. Necessaries
of life are food, clothes and shelters. They don't have it so they spend their life very toughly. So providing actual goods
like food is the most efficient way.
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I prefer living alone in a place that is near the campus. First, it is encroached on my privacy. I can't do my private attitude
because it can be harmful to my roommate. So I am always concious my roommate so I feel unwell. Second, if I and my roommate have
differences with personalities, it is tough to live together. We may always fight because of personal characters. So I and also
my roommate feel uncomfortable each other. So I think that living alone in a place is better to me.
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I disagree with the statement that music and art should havae the same value as other subjects at school such as math and science.
First, the subjects about art require the ability. To sing or draw picures need talent. Everyone can not do this well because
people are born with the artistic ability. So it is unfair to the students that do not have the talent. Second, music and art are
not used in the practical work. We do not need music and art in our real work. So they are not important in our life. So I think
that music and art must not have the same value as other subjects at school.
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I agree that people can not learn important lessons about life in classrooms. First, people do not think the life lessons are important and necessary. Most people say that students go to schools to learn things about their subjects and teachers should teach materials about their tests. So students can not have a choice to learn about our life in school. Second, the important lessons about life are experiences. We can not know or understand about life by learning from other people's classes. We can have experiences in many situations and they are affected to our life. If we suffer them, we get information about life in nature. It is a much better way to learn deeply about our life.
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I agree that the use of cell phones should be prohibited in public. First, using cell phone makes noise. Public is all people's. It is not a personal room. The noise than makes with a cell phone makes people not work hard. They can not concentrate well. They also feel angry with this. When they have to call to someone, they should go outside public and then, use cell phone freely. Second, using cell phone is to violate to the right of enjoying their time quietly in public. They do not go to public to use cell phone. Their purpose to go there is working, dealing with their problems or enjoying their time. As a result, they do not want to be obstructed by someone during managing.

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Delivery: Eri, I'm proud of you for not reading this one!!! Great job! You're delivery is a little labored and a bit choppy but I don't care! However, be careful on your pronunciation of the words "nicotine and neccesities." Nice work on not reading. You can only get better now.
Language Use: On this be careful on your word choice ("roughly" is not a word) You may try saying ~so they live a tough life...~
Topic Development: This, you did a good job on, but just remember that your Topic development can be affected by your Language Use!
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